Nope. Not good.
It's weird but the sketches look better in my notebook than they do here.
I outlined the pencil with a Sharpie to make the edges more crisp, or at least stand out better. I think that might have something to do with it. Or it could be the specific and limited color pencil palette I chose for this page. Or it's all of it. Or none of it.
Either way, I don't like it so back to the drawing book.
Maybe tomorrow I'll try warm-up sketching with a single subject instead of going for lots of different ones...